Post by GG on Nov 23, 2007 17:36:53 GMT -5
alright, so i see areas were you really need to elaborate on. basically all three big points, appearance, personality and history need to be worked on. i'd say appearance needs another decent sized paragraph added to it and same goes fo personality. as for the history two paragraphs should be added since it's the most important part of the application and we get to know your charater best in this section.
& all posts need to be a minimum of 450 words. so you'll need to expand your roleplaying sample as well. i know it may seem difficult at first but trust me, it gets a whole lot easier and really will make you grow as a roleplayer! :]
& all posts need to be a minimum of 450 words. so you'll need to expand your roleplaying sample as well. i know it may seem difficult at first but trust me, it gets a whole lot easier and really will make you grow as a roleplayer! :]